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Nicole Ruiz's avatar

Great start to the day!

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Fallon Clark's avatar

Whoo! Thank you :)

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Andre Ruiz's avatar

Thanks for this, "espresso shot." It might be a productive day after all. :p

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Fallon Clark's avatar

I love a mini story to get my noodler going for the day :)

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Robert Garron's avatar

I love the twist!

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Fallon Clark's avatar

Glad you liked it, thank you! This was a fun piece to write, and it was especially fun to wrangle down to fewer than 300 words from a starting point of nearly 500.

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Robert Garron's avatar

Sometimes, whittling it down is the hardest part! Great job!

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Kristin Noland's avatar

I like your story. The title is awesome too.

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Fallon Clark's avatar

Titling is always a bear, isn't it? Thankfully, this protag's name was Rupert Charm from inception, so it made the titling just a bit easier.

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